Hey not bad. I dont really like the bass, maybe thats why it sounds like cheese. I would go for a lower bass and cut the high end. If you have fl6 I would gladly help you out =]
Sep-30-2006 01:53
sterilis
Sunset Ibiza
Registered: May 2005
Location: Belfast/Ibiza/Manchester
i dont use fruity i use cubase. see there are two basses but the sub bass isnt coming through for some reason. ive put lowpass filters and eq'ed it and it still wont sit in the mix.
I'm no expert by any means, but I'm really struggling trying to find structure in the melody here. I think there could be more transitions in the progression - as in there needs to be more. It felt like it was stuck a bit at times.
it might be your percussion...it can get better. try experiment with that.
i also noticed an off-beat bassline in there. that might be a part of that cheeziness of which you think the track has. try mess around with different sequences for the bassline. or make a whole new one instead
Sep-30-2006 05:34
LENG
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2005
Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia
hmm... i'll try to give some gap in between the long tail effects there (and they're easily identified, vengeance samples). not sure about cheesy here but i like the bass.
Sep-30-2006 07:42
sterilis
Sunset Ibiza
Registered: May 2005
Location: Belfast/Ibiza/Manchester
just deleted the melody and changed the mid bass to a simple rolling bassline. it was annoying me too much.
