A quick warning, don't listen to this through headphones... Head in a vice is the only way I can put it
I can't really think of anything to say about the track. Intresting for 20 seconds I guess, but just plain uncomfortable after that.
Jan-13-2007 16:16
Akia
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2006
Location: Stockholm
I like the effects, they create a scary atmosphere! But imo it miss a main melody that take you through. Some nice ideas! Keep working!
Takere!
Akia
Jan-13-2007 19:49
coldblack
tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2006
Location:
@ Sunclyder
@Andrew_L
Hmmm...Well, interesting feedback. But What do you mean by "plain uncomfortable"? Thing is, I did want this to go a bit harsh on the ears, but can you please elaborate? Thanks!
@Akia
Yup, I was looking to keep it dark sounding. Im not really looking to create dance friendly or uplifting/positive type trance...
The "main melody" starts just when the sample ends. Im just tweaking the track now.
Thanks for your comments people. I do appreciate it.
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Jan-14-2007 09:07
Spliph
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: CTA
i like your atmospheric kick sounds... to describe it like that...
i have some great ideas for some melodies though... still missing that part.... i guess in my tracks its the opposite, ha...
keep workin @ it, iim sure you were in a different planet creating this track...
cheers,
nico
p.s. maybe you can critique my ''outbound'' track??
hehe thanks for checking it out. Yes, I was in a different planet when I made it.
I re-EQd it and it sounds different now. I am also adding some samples and vox to it. I will share it with you all as soon as I make my myspace profile.
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Jan-15-2007 04:03
marcusk
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: 3rd Planet from the Sun
Hey,
Like that dark vibe you have going.
But at 0:20 seconds i wasn't too fond of this next sound. it just sounds to me like too much delay. maybe try using a triplet delay, or add some off beat sounds to not make it sound so loopy, unless that's what your going for.
But I think you've got something solid for the first 20 seconds though.
Thanks for checking it out dude!
I did want to add a certain feel of "heaviness" to it through bass and kicks.
Though the bass/kick patterns are quite simple really, I looked to create an atmosphere around the bassline/kicks through the cicada type sounds.
Thanks for your feedback again!
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