I like the idea of the song but the realization not that much - drums are too simple and I don't like the tone of the bass. Work a bit more on it. Cheers

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thanks sonic...i was unsure of the bass too. I fixed it and tweaked the percs a little and updated the link. Anyone else?

Great mastering M8

Nice vocal, so i'm waiting for yopur update

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sunclyder i'm glad you like it. Hope the bass sounds alright...it's my first attempt @ sidechaining. ******** what do you mean by "cans" and stockboying? Hope you liked it as well
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I finally updated this thang. Hope you all enjoy it. It is more or less complete. Thanks for all the help.
http://download.yousendit.com/4A38FFF26FE8D6CC



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Last edited by Andy French on Nov-29-2006 at 20:20

Great flow in this track!

But it's a bit dry... Makes it lack some atmosphere which I think would lift this track up alot!

thanks for the feed back expanded. I added a few more subtle pad layers and attempted to master it. Anyone else like what they hear? Criticism is always appreciated. Thanks
Andy

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Originally posted by ******** cans contrast huge it is so upbeat compaired to where it goes... the last part of the track sounds solid.. but the intro feels totally off. when you go into the track it goes from a more drunken minor wasted funk into a more serious flash up stage then gets sorta encased and perhaps even somber what you have going with the bass is a - superman (what is the track you obviously must know the track.. who is this man. cans are good for superman but the last part is totally a different track interesting none the less. also the hat / stockboying over the vocals maybe even kills it.. I can feel it go back into the drive where it stops

I pretty much have the same opinion, the last part was kind of well done, but the intro was painful and long, I liked the vocals though

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This appears to me everytime I try to get the file dude.
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Thanks for letting me know about the intro. I fixed the bugs in it. Let me know...Thanks
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http://download.yousendit.com/944FC68E09BF7CA4

Last edited by Andy French on Dec-03-2006 at 17:41

Nice track mate. Well produced.

Just 2 small remarks (personal opinion) :

- sidechained a little bit too hard
- I miss one (or two) breaks; followed by a climax.

But good remix overal :-)

Made with Fl Studio ?

Cheers,
DJ Indigo