I downloaded the first song and gotta say that u got the talent, excellent stuff. This song really has potential so I would like to give you a bit deeper analysis:

First about the build-up. The melody already starts in 0.27, It's a bit too early if you think dj:s to mix this but anyway the melodies are really good in first strophe. Goldenscan - Sunrise came my mind when I listened first 2 mins , not that it sounds same but the feeling is simiral. Anyway first two mins truly rocks, splendid !

Then break part:
Strings/stringpads in 2.16 are amazing, sounds like made with real synths so Im assuming that u have some hardware gear too. Only thing that could be made better is the synth that starts to "flood" in. Melody is ok but not perfect, needs a bit polishing. In 2.42 that higher played synth needs to be smoother, I didnt like it very much.
maybe it could use some more reverb and delay also but anyway the sound is too harsh now. Overall the break part is well done, needs just few improvements.

The arrangement is flawless and melodies good but only thing that alway disturbs me is that "highnote" synth. I really think that you could get a record deal if you make some changes and then send a demo somewhere, just Fintastic job

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Thanx for your feedback Breakaholic!

I know that we really have to spend at least second day with the song! Both songs are part of our 90min Live-set so everything is still running under MIDI and we made really fast 2-track-mixing of those. Hope we can arrange some time to finish songs and make deascent mixes.

There are three members in the band and two of us runs own studio so we have guite a lot hardies around...not that we don´t use soft-ones, but the harder the better BTW heard your songs and those are really amazing....(isn´t it that U basically use softies?)

Anyway....there is more to come so, please LISTEN these SONGS and reply

Hyvä Soomi!!!

One word - wow.

I really liked both of the tracks, with my favourite being the first one.

Very nice stuff!

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Originally posted by Collab BTW heard your songs and those are really amazing....(isn´t it that U basically use softies?) [/B]

Thanks and yes, I use Software progs. with cheap soundcard . Im possible getting my first record deal so that's why I cant post any new songs, well atleast for a while....

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great track, you realy know your rythums.
over all it sounds very PRO, you could have righten a better main melody I think.
the things that I really like was the bassline and the build up at
the start and at the end.
the only thing I didn't like was the pichbend.

Collab you will be on track for a recording deal
keep up the good work.

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oh yeah...

i like it! i like it!
if you work on that 1st one a little more, it could be really really REALLY good. i believe in you!

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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.

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Originally posted by breakaholic Thanks and yes, I use Software progs. with cheap soundcard . Im possible getting my first record deal so that's why I cant post any new songs, well atleast for a while....

did you get that Recording deal breakaholic? you should have.

which tracks did you use for the demos

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Originally posted by breakaholic Thanks and yes, I use Software progs. with cheap soundcard . Im possible getting my first record deal so that's why I cant post any new songs, well atleast for a while....

may I ask what program`s you use????

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Originally posted by Peter Campbell which tracks did you use for the demos

None of my former productions, I didn't even send demos anywhere. A local Dj send the first version of my new song (Skyway) to the right people and next day I got message from a Finnish label that they would like to release it, things happened pretty fast.
First I just have to make some changes to my track, it was too long (9.27).I have to remove some parts.
Now I've made the changes and I'm going to contact'em soon, then I'll know if they actually want to release it...

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Last edited by breakaholic on Dec-24-2001 at 17:42

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Originally posted by mantisnl may I ask what program`s you use????

Still using Orion, Fruityloops and some VST-Instruments...

I try to upload a short clip of the useless part of the song I had to remove. maybe it gives some direction of the song level...

EDIT: Which didn't work...

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Hello everybody!!!

Thanks for your comments about songs(at least from the 1st one)...
As soon as we get our arses back to the studio we´ll start to work with the 1st song. Meanwhile...I´ll try to get along with mine "mum in law" and her cookings "u must eat....eat more....have more turkey....u´ll love it!!!"

-Collab-