on this little track i start working on. comments, ideas to improve and continue it... thanks

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nice drumloop, especially the bass on this track is too thin.

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If less is more think about how much more more would be. -Frasier

I thought this sounded good so far. I cant comment on the sounds in specific as i was listening at work but the melody and moodiness of the track caught me. I would like to see it breakdown into a slightly different melody, keeping that moody feel perhaps with a dark sounding instrument (no supersaws)

Good stuff. keep it up

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