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Greetings,
Nice sound you have going. It's rather bright, if you ask me. The bassline has a good low hum to it that's appealing enough. The arpy leads and gated stuff seemed trite at first, but it works in some way. Perhaps it could sound less wide and soft, maybe a little more metallic.
A lyric always makes a track feel less repetitious in my eyes, and the couple of vocal effects you had going on helped with that alot.
Sweet piano... I'm always a sucker for pianos.
Chillout trance... I like it alot.
You didn't do bad! I personally liked it, it kinda fit my style a tad. You could have some minor tweaking to preform on some of the synths, but otherwise, I'd be happy with this piece.
Gotta run... I can't believe I'm working on Christmas eve...
Merry CHRISTmas!
PS - IF you'd like to listen to my winter-themed track -- check out the "Winter Ballad" thread (I'm ex- Four_On_Four-er)
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