Soft and nice, like the kick! The melody is really chill, sounds good! Nice job!


Takere!

Akia

Thanx.

I have made a few changes in the tune. An update will come later.

Great perc. Love the bass. Interesting how the vocals sit on the mix with that room reverb. Great drive on the offbeat snare. I feel that the sine lead could come in a little less abruptly, and could be followed through a little better. Other than that, steller damn track!

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Originally posted by Happy2Listen Great perc. Love the bass. Interesting how the vocals sit on the mix with that room reverb. Great drive on the offbeat snare. I feel that the sine lead could come in a little less abruptly, and could be followed through a little better. Other than that, steller damn track!

Thanks for the comment.
Did you mean the melody in the breakdown?

An update will be up now!

i like robbies songs so i was inclined to check this one out, especially being posted on a EDM forum

vocal could be a little cleaner, it sounds like its been put through some light distortion or something, either way, uve fiddled with it somewhat.

pad and bass matches the vocal, good work there

got a real sci-fi sound halfway, i like it, chilled out stuff.

a real laid back remix, sounds good, i kinda associate it with that 'tracking treasure down' sorta vibe, u could roll a joint and smoke that and get lazy to it on a hot summers day

keep up the good work dude

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Originally posted by KilldaDJ i like robbies songs so i was inclined to check this one out, especially being posted on a EDM forum vocal could be a little cleaner, it sounds like its been put through some light distortion or something, either way, uve fiddled with it somewhat. pad and bass matches the vocal, good work there got a real sci-fi sound halfway, i like it, chilled out stuff. a real laid back remix, sounds good, i kinda associate it with that 'tracking treasure down' sorta vibe, u could roll a joint and smoke that and get lazy to it on a hot summers day keep up the good work dude

Thanks again for the comments.

I have put the vocal through some light distortion. Maybe I will change it, maybe not.

//Micke

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Originally posted by in_dreams Did you mean the melody in the breakdown?

Yes. The sine wave blipper

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Originally posted by Happy2Listen Yes. The sine wave blipper

I should see what I can do.

The tune is updated.

Updates:

Fade in of breakmelody
Vocal are no longer distored
Another Main Melody is added

Cheers

vocals can use reverb/delay instrumentation and samples sound 5-7 years old... other than that- the 4:30min mark souns nice. Oh, needs compression on top of the mix, that will give the vocals and the other elements more of an analog blend/sound(unified sound), right now it sounds like i can hear every single separate sample or sound of the mixdown which just doesn't seem to blend very well. oh there are also some slight synch issues with the vocals at the beginning, maybe fix that too...

Thanx for the comment. I am not really good at mastering a tune and I don't really know how to make the compression so it sounds good. The tune is compressed but maybe not right.

I would be happy if someone could told me how to do it right or if someone could help me with that if I send you a wavefile of the tune.

Cheers!