the bassline reminds me of satisfaction. your samples seem to be good. but however the track lacks something, dunno what.

Some heavy bass stuff going on. sounds like hardware. might be wrong though.

The vocals works nicely. the bass sound is very filtered, i dont know, maybe it sounds too filtered or something. the bass sounds better at around 1:45..

nice stuff, but lacks something.. maybe some strings and more percussions. or maybe the bass simply is taking up too much space.

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no, this is a great start for a track

i think however, the key's off by a few notes... and i think you have too much going on, try to build up on it! and surprise the listener!

cheers

p.s.s maybe listen to my track for some idea's --> drop dead.

i love your chopped vocals...maybe its not even chopped up.... something i need for my tracks....

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Hey guys Tnx for the feedback, As you guys said The bass was Horribly mixed down! I noticed this when I went to the studio today so I changed it to something better, Ill never mix for so long again it just turns out bad when your sleepy hahaha!

How ever heres the uppdated version with a better mixdown, But still somethings missing might be some percussion or a lead or something but that i will fix next week , for now your feedback is more than welcome, the sample is some kind of buildupp

hehe and the vocals are chopped I recorded them for 1 year ago or so and now Im making a reedit of the track Midnight in paris I wasent satisfied with the original!

New link!
NEW LINK !

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fuck, wanna make a track together? absolutely loving this... just got back from markus schulz here in amsterdam..unbelievable...

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hey mate ! hahaha Im glad you like it =)
I just finnished it Might uppload it in the next few days.
sure we could do a track together.

Ill Pm you my Msnger

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The break is great, though I would've cut off the vocals, It's probably just me because I usually listen to mostly instrumental stuff.

Don't know about the rest of the track, not my cup of tea I guess

The vocals are great! Awesome kick! Maybe it would need more variation, but it sounds really interesting! Keep it up!


Takere!

Akia

heeey folks , yea i know this tarck isnt everyones cup of tea =) but a man gotta experiment hahaha, akira im glad you fins it interesting.

ive doone some work on it to add some variations and a guitar lead so I think its more appealing now =) but ill uppload it when its 100%

tnx for the feedback has helped alot, tnx to nomen to for the great feedback!

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Siemaxik

i like Your tune

I'm waiting for full!!

Cheerssss.........
KArol

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tnx mate glad you like it =)

full will be done in the week sometime, But glad news I finnished a remix for infrasonic =) Grat track ill see if I can post a sample in the fourms would be great to see what you guys think about it!

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