8) hey guys! hows it going, did it last nite. heres link

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Hey,

are you planning a concept album about space or something? Nice one!

pro:
+ huge layering
+ nice melodies
+ I think the bass works nicely

contra:
- the sound gets a little muddy.
- the structure is repetitive

Actually I like it a little nondistinct in sound, it makes things dreamy and stuff, I like this kind of sea-of-sound for headphone listening, you have to figure out the details yourself. Maybe you can still do a little bit of EQ work to bring up the main elements in the mix.
I also noticed that your tracks are very similar in character. I would like some changes that kinda take you more by surprise. I think it follows a certain formula too much. Maybe some cool FX to spice it up?

Other than that, neat work, thanks for sharing!

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Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)

homepage: http://www.cybernetika.de

Sounds well done and all but not enough distinctive sounds, make the melody stand out more and it'll help a lot.

Hey [nxx]! Very nice melody and atmosphere! You really have growed! A great track! Maybe you could use more effects and fx to vatiate it more. But very well done!


Takere!

Akia

8) hey akia, cybernetica, anthrofred
thanks alot for the comments and opinions