hey mate i like the buildup, very explosive the bassline sounds cool to. i think the vocals half way are a bit to much synthesized.. they sound a bit to "robot".. the overall melody sounds good.. well done mate

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nice ... cep't for the first synthy bass...it sounds a bit cheesay...overall a nice production and I don't think the voice is that much robotic as bidor said

I like the percussions

nice toying with the vocal stutters

buildup is nice but that synth sounds a bit digital to me...or something.

overall pretty good, keep it up

Amelia has a nice voice...only if you could have let it the way listeners could hear her a little bit...

or she got out of tune so much, that you felt the need to cover it?

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Hey guys. Thanks a lot for taking the time to listen. I appreciate it. The vocals are actually exactly the same both times. The second time i guess they are just more covered up so they dont sound so "robotic". The stutters are in there to fix some length issues on a couple notes, i thought it would be more fun to do stutters than timestretching. And other than that i just put some autotune on the vocals to make sure everything was dead on since she had a cold when she recorded it. So that is definitely amelia. Not sure what you mean by the synth sounding "digital" but i think its probably an envelope issue that i never could figure out. I tried and it just never got to be exactly what i wanted. Anyways, thanks for listening and for your comments. They are much appreciated.

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cheesy as fuck man. that bass is so damn commercial. you've improved on your eqing skills though which helps the track move well.

the voice sounds a bit like a commercial track i heard a few years back.

who wrote the vocals? she was supposed to sing my vocals but never got back to me

anyway nice for a commerical track not my cup of tea but well done all the same.

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Hey man! Thanks for listening. Amelia wrote the vocals by the way. If you yell at her she may do some for you. What track did the vocals remind you of?

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cant remember the track/ it also has a bit of delerium - after all in it. i dont no i like her voice though thats why i asked her to sing my vocals. if your talking to you tell her to get back to me

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will do

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Originally posted by sterilis cant remember the track/ it also has a bit of delerium - after all in it. i dont no i like her voice though thats why i asked her to sing my vocals. if your talking to you tell her to get back to me

which track? sorry, i'm working 2 jobs and going to school, i forget these things sometimes

[img]or she got out of tune so much, that you felt the need to cover it?[/img]

i sure hope not. did i brett?

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Originally posted by prolikewhoa [img]or she got out of tune so much, that you felt the need to cover it?[/img] i sure hope not. did i brent?

don't be sad

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I like the melody, uplifting and driving! You have to work alot more with the vocals though, can´t hear any word at all . But keep it up!


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Originally posted by prolikewhoa which track? sorry, i'm working 2 jobs and going to school, i forget these things sometimes [img]or she got out of tune so much, that you felt the need to cover it?[/img] i sure hope not. did i brett?

frequency

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