After playing the same loop a 1000 times, it's very hard to critisize objectively, so ANY comment is welcome

Name: Belgica Retrorum
Quality: 160 kbps
Genre: Techno/trance
Duration 6:50


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There is some potential but you need to aim for a more defined structure, the track is a bit all over the place at the moment. I like the percussion though, good work there.

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I'm all for the percussion on this track. It's rather chill from the beginning but declines into a monotone track that is rather flat. The melody lines really don't go anywhere and need to be planned better. Some of the synths sounded way too dry or out of place and need addressing. Only the sine-wave synth sound like it was remotely in place. You also need to consider other elements, such as pads, other percussion lines, and buildup in general. There's much work to do.

So basically: what he said.

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Sounds as a good start but as the other said, you need more structure. Man, I really like that kick! Keep working!


Takere!

Akia