Haha cool. Gimme a few minutes, I'll listen right away!

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Originally posted by cybernetica Haha cool. Gimme a few minutes, I'll listen right away!

nice one! the boss himself!

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Now listen to the bosses words :P

The intro works nicely.
I think there are some elements that go off-key. The bell synth in the background starting at 0:13 should be used with care, its off key with the rest.
That new lead synth you made is strangely detuned. Hmm, maybe go for something without detuning, it makes it seem kinda offkey.

I really like the synth sounds on this one.. no, wait..

Haha cool use of the sample, that break works in a funny way, but it works definately.

Whats that kind of low tom sound? See, its completely interfering with the bass frequencies. Take it out or replace it.
this is a very trippy remix, lol. 2:50 is cool.

I think this needs more hi frequency percussion (hats?)

Nice remix! Very cool to see what people make of my tracks. Anyone else want to remix something?

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Originally posted by cybernetica Now listen to the bosses words :P [QUOTE]The intro works nicely. I think there are some elements that go off-key. The bell synth in the background starting at 0:13 should be used with care, its off key with the rest. That new lead synth you made is strangely detuned. Hmm, maybe go for something without detuning, it makes it seem kinda offkey.

off key? hmm, ill look into that.

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I really like the synth sounds on this one.. no, wait..

lol whats wrong?

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Haha cool use of the sample, that break works in a funny way, but it works definately.

glad you like it

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Whats that kind of low tom sound? See, its completely interfering with the bass frequencies. Take it out or replace it. this is a very trippy remix, lol. 2:50 is cool.

im not sure what you mean with the "low tom sound".. could you please elaborate that a bit more?
makes me happy that you like the remix hehe

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I think this needs more hi frequency percussion (hats?)

there are plenty in there.. think i either have to turn up the volume a bit more, or higher the frequencies with mastering in sound forge..

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Nice remix! Very cool to see what people make of my tracks. Anyone else want to remix something?

sure... if you sent me a pm with a remix pack of your tune "Droid IV" ill be glad to remix that to!


thanks again,


Bidor

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Originally posted by Bidor im not sure what you mean with the "low tom sound".. could you please elaborate that a bit more? makes me happy that you like the remix hehe

After the breakdown at 2:15 theres a new low percussive element, that makes the bass range kinda muddy.

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there are plenty in there.. think i either have to turn up the volume a bit more, or higher the frequencies with mastering in sound forge..

do so, because it is lacking drive right now, probably due to missing hats.

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sure... if you sent me a pm with a remix pack of your tune "Droid IV" ill be glad to remix that to!

I'll see what I can do. Hope I still find the project file and the samples I used in it...

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Originally posted by cybernetica After the breakdown at 2:15 theres a new low percussive element, that makes the bass range kinda muddy. do so, because it is lacking drive right now, probably due to missing hats. I'll see what I can do. Hope I still find the project file and the samples I used in it...

nice one, ill look into the high frequencies.

and looking forward to the remix pack!

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hey there.

Listened to your track. sounds cool at parts the remix, the part at 2:30 is cool. but the percussions are very lacking.
Its not something you can fix by upping the highs.

a simple closed and open hat would add alot of drive to this one.

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Originally posted by cybernetica Anyone else want to remix something?

Actually.. If I could get a remix package for this track (the Original) I would like to give it a shot.. PM me if you are interested.

8) hi bidor! im downloading now 8)

[0.01] nice fx start and lead
[0.15] bassline kicks in
[0.27] kicks in
2nd lead is nice
[0.54] kicks stops nice flowing lead
[1.08] kicks back nicely
[1.32] nice twisted sounds happening 8)
[2.12] vocal is nice
[2.16] nice build. bassline kicks in
flow is really nice 8)
[2.50] break
[3.04] kicks back flowing nicely
[3.28] towards end nice fx around there
[3.53] ends

its a really nice track. really trippy.
i enjoyed listening.

Unfortunately, it's been too long since I heard the original, but I will comment anyways:

Nice Goa elements that flyby and hypnotize after the intro. The kick is a good standard Psy-Twirt. The gated elements and all seem to flow nicely.

Excellent use of Portamelo on the synth. It slides around with the finesse of a psy champion. Good work on that one.

It's rather short for psy trance. I personally don't think it lacks too much high freqs, but maybe just one more hat line with more resonance.

This is short indeed. It's good, but it doesn't really capture as many ideas as you think psytrance would. It's got some power and drive, but it could be better. Nevertheless, it's a good take on the style.

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Originally posted by Subtle hey there. Listened to your track. sounds cool at parts the remix, the part at 2:30 is cool. but the percussions are very lacking. Its not something you can fix by upping the highs. a simple closed and open hat would add alot of drive to this one.

thanks for the reply mate ill see what i can do with the percussions.

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Originally posted by [nxx] 8) hi bidor! im downloading now 8) [0.01] nice fx start and lead [0.15] bassline kicks in [0.27] kicks in 2nd lead is nice [0.54] kicks stops nice flowing lead [1.08] kicks back nicely [1.32] nice twisted sounds happening 8) [2.12] vocal is nice [2.16] nice build. bassline kicks in flow is really nice 8) [2.50] break [3.04] kicks back flowing nicely [3.28] towards end nice fx around there [3.53] ends its a really nice track. really trippy. i enjoyed listening.

reviews like this make me happy glad you liked the trippy feel on the track

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Originally posted by B_man Unfortunately, it's been too long since I heard the original, but I will comment anyways: Nice Goa elements that flyby and hypnotize after the intro. The kick is a good standard Psy-Twirt. The gated elements and all seem to flow nicely. Excellent use of Portamelo on the synth. It slides around with the finesse of a psy champion. Good work on that one. It's rather short for psy trance. I personally don't think it lacks too much high freqs, but maybe just one more hat line with more resonance. This is short indeed. It's good, but it doesn't really capture as many ideas as you think psytrance would. It's got some power and drive, but it could be better. Nevertheless, it's a good take on the style.

thanks for the quality review mate! i might make an extended version of this.. and have to make some changes with the percs etc.. ill keep you all updated!


thanks again,


Bidor

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