I like the gated pad from the get-go, but I'm not entirely sure that the gated should be there immediately. Maybe you could sweep the effect into play from the get-go. This is partially because I was wondering if quicktime was doing its usual "beginning glitch" on me when the song started up.

Otherwise, it's very robotic, hipnotic and catchy. I like the bell morphs on one of those synth. When the main bassline drops into play I'm really feeling the need to bob my head. This is some dancy crud.

It's like house... kraftwerk, and something else. It's robo trance. I don't usually listen to stuff like this, but I know it exists.

The kick is a well compressed, raw 909 form, and the synths and textures all sound like analog devices run through a sequencer. Its clean, its catchy and its rythmically driving. I feel like a visual artist admiring a futurism drawing at the local, dusty museum.

The ontro was strangely greeted by silence... okay... well, it's a nice way to be DJ friendly.

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thnx for the listen b_man...as for the "gated" thing, i'm not syure what you mean, but it could possible be quicktime being annoying lol.

I love it man, very hypnotic

May give this one a spin out this weekend and see how she does!

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Great tune, liked it lots.

Very rythmic with a nice flow, I would dance to this! But to variate it, you colud add a synth with a different melody, so it becomes a bit trancy(...but I guess people who like this kind of music would hate that...). However, well done!


Takere!

Akia

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Originally posted by Akia Very rythmic with a nice flow, I would dance to this! But to variate it, you colud add a synth with a different melody, so it becomes a bit trancy(...but I guess people who like this kind of music would hate that...). However, well done! Takere! Akia

Nah, I think that actually sounds like a nice idea.

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Originally posted by RJT May give this one a spin out this weekend and see how she does!

plz do!

thnx for the listens and comments everybody!

I check out your other, just been busy sorry for actin a fool

will check this out this eveing and give feedback for the other


(are they the same?)

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Originally posted by Allied Nations I check out your other, just been busy sorry for actin a fool will check this out this eveing and give feedback for the other (are they the same?)

no prob

and this is a different version than the other.

i see you got a new track up as well, i'll check it when i'm off from work!

nice...sounds a bit like you were trippin' when you've done it, right?

nice sounds...and I like the gating...the kick might be a little strange for my taste but isn't bad either...


nice one...a bit more variation might work too ... overall good job

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Concept is great, the gated pad could vary a little more thoughout the song and for the ost part all these sounds are pretty flat. They lack that vibrancy.


overall concept is ace, execution needs work. percussion needs thickening for sure. Synths and sounds lack that warmth.

good job

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