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It's my new tune around 80's or new romantic :-)

Title: Cafe
Quality: 192 kbps
Lenght: 4:04

http://www.sendspace.com/file/v7qmb3

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Nice atmosphere! I like the mainsynth and the melody a lot, not a very strong kick but I think it fits good. Nice pianoplay. Nice listening! Well done!


Takere!

Akia

Thanx for post Akia But I think that the whole mix is too muddy, so I must do sth with this song :-)

Cheers

I'm not entirely sure the kick and bassline match. Perhaps the kick needs more medium range energy to stand side by side with that bassline. The bass also seems a tad muddy -- it doesn't adequately fill in the holes between the kicks, and it's also overlapping the kick.

Otherwise, the break had a really cool sounding arp. I'm not sure I like that snare... it's kind of muffled and WAY out there, so to speak on the sound spectrum.

The bandpass piano was a nice touch. I have a big weakness for pianos, so I'm a little biased for them.

The general overview of the percussion was that the highhats seem to be a tad weak. Their could be some additional phatness in the hats.

Otherwise, musically speaking, the track has a logical progression, drive, and melodic passages that are both cool and low-tone. The low-key passages make me think of a dusk atmosphere at a beachy setting for a cafe'... good work.

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Thank You Bman!

Your notes are very important to me... Yes I have problems with stereo imaging...and instrumnets equalizing .. it's difficult...
but I hope that I will be better in this matter...

Thank You Again and Greetz.