Hey!

Takkra have done a great remix of Rich´s awesome tune Tonewashed and he asked me to do the vocals for it. I said "sure" but I worried about how to make a vocal as strong as that song... few weeks later I actually think we did it!

Here it is:
http://download.yousendit.com/269A9FF902169A62


Tonewashed

Paralysed, the feelings were too strong.
Broken heart, dropped as trash.

Mania, my mind was possessed.
Without control, an addict of love.
Must have missed, that hesitanting glance.
Too naive, I belived in the words.
No contents, empty echos in space.
Effaced ray, faded into the dusk.
Belongs to the past, that wont happend again.
You will never see my tears!


Thanks!

Akia

Last edited by Akia on Mar-07-2007 at 13:43

kick is a bit flat but the bass is nice.

vocals are good but they dont fit in some parts. i like the drive of it. just the kick doesnt work for me.

good job!

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hmm...not my coup of tea. sounds too much like the original, and the production quality is mediocre.

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Last edited by djsphere on Feb-14-2007 at 10:45

Thank you Barry, we will check that!

Well djsphere, the original has no vocal .

Nice Track!! good sounds and melody....

Vocal is different

Well done.....

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hey there,

well the kick doesn't work because it's a bit muffled...sorry

otherwise it's pretty cool

sorry, but the vocals seem off to me...
the vocal effects are cool though...but then...when it's in the "verse" it sounds like there's a note or two a bit drifting off...

otherwise quite a nice track.

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hi there!

love the vocal......


kick needs compression though! and EQ.... maybe try EQing the vox also, it can be LOUDER, yet sound very nice.


oh, and then it goes off key


there's some composition that needs work... need some sort of constant drive and not somethign that slows it down etc.

very very nice work on the vocals, respect... =)

say, i've been needing vocals for a while

Keep workin on it!

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quote:

Originally posted by Akia Well djsphere, the original has no vocal .

except the vocal

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8) hi akia! the track is amazing by the way. and your vocal is really nice as usual. nice lyrics. i enjoyed listening. meanwhile take care.

Thanks a lot NortStar! I´m glad you like it!

BOOsTER, where are the vocals off? I can´t hear it .

Cool! Thank you Spliph! Just ask .

Djsphere, without the vocals can it not be a vocalremix .

Thank you very much [nxx]!

hey guys - what a surprise hehe!

good arrangement and i like the kick mate also the mixing is done well. only a few little bits i dislike.

2.06 - the first note in the vocal is a bit off key. would be nice to chop that vocal line out or maybe make it flow a little better.


i like the techy arrangement. and the way you use the minimal percs, bass and kick to good effect.

4.05 - vocal sounds great. very well done guys. maybe have a little more flow to the vocals and less words so there is less to focus on. but i love the melody of the vocals. and i really like the reversed/reverbed talking. it gives a good atmosphere. overall i think this is a cool rmx and the mixing is very well done imo. thanks for giving this a go guys

rich

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Thank you very much Rich! We will check that 2:06 and see what we can do with it. Maybe you right about that it´s to many words but I thought we get it to flow anyway... I´m glad you like the melody of it! A great track to work with!

Last edited by Akia on Feb-15-2007 at 11:22