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Originally posted by ganeshaaa Hey! Heres a enw track i finished! Is old Skool goa style Diifeerent frm the kind ive already posted. Check : http://www.myspace.com/jaiganesh Feel free to leave comments Cheers

I certainly like the feel. Nice and mystical...
any chance for a seperate DL?

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Listening ..

- bassline is a bit weak: i have to exert effort to hear it. Maybe you could add a sub-bass an octave lower. The short frequencies need to be filled a lot more in general.

- this track has some potential but you hold back way too much. While I was listening to it I was hearing in my head a lot of possible 8/16 bar patterns with the same synth sounds that would make the track sound a lot crazier.

- the drum roll is too long. The track seems to loose a bit of energy after that.

- Not much development in the melody after the breakdown.

Bottom line: you need to bring the bassline out more and take more risks with the structure of the song and the melodies.

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Hey guys thanks for the listen and the constructive feedback
@Darkarbiter - am Posting an MP3 . Appreciate ur Comments
@DjKenosis - Thannx for taking time to review my tracks i appreciate ur feeddback and now that i sit back and listen to it i cant help but agree with wht u say lol.
I can hear a lot of those 8/16 bar patterns now.I think i must have been in a hurry to finish this track. And yea after the excisevely long drum roll ive tried to drop the energy and build it up again by automating the pitch on the short melody loop that Follows the drum roll. I think the picture gets across if u listne to the track a cpl of times but can definately do with some adjustments so that the transition is smoother. Any Ideas ???? would love to know
Also ive left the Mp3 for download if u like maybe can give u a clearer picture

http://www.sendspace.com/file/xt5rb0


Thanks again
Peace

it has a flow..it can be a melodic bomber...keep working on it

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