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A very nicefeeling tune, I love the melody! The kick sounds great too. Well done!


Takere!

Akia

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Originally posted by Akia A very nicefeeling tune, I love the melody! The kick sounds great too. Well done! Takere! Akia

cheers akai

anyone else?

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pretty good..

hey mate nice tune, im gonna pop it on cd and use it in me next set if im able to, it has that static blue icone feel to it, hehehe nice one mate keep up the good work

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Dude... this bassy euphoric trance tune rocks. I like the feel of the mix even though elements of it feel rather minimalistic from the get go and buildup.

Does the phatter lead during the breakdown have a few squares in there? Just curious. It sounds wide, smooth, but a little crispy on the inside.

The melody has an interesting drive to it.

One problem... Your treble frequencies in the track are either lacking or very weak. I think there is some muddiness somewhere between the bassline and something else... just a tad.

Otherwise... it was good.

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listening,

like the perc work and kick, are they sampled loops or your own one shots?. nice break, like the bass but the detuned stab does not work for me here, al get back to that. now the plucks are good, and the squares work well!

the break up is starting to get a bit repetative, the breaks here and there sound cool though, maybe introduce some pads and more variation here???

breakdown sounds dry, again pad work is probably needed. lead sounds cool, the breakdown is dragging out a tad too. Get some white noise for the kick in too.

i like it, dont get wrong, just the few personal tweaks i feel to mention but why lie to producers, blunt critisism is what you need. great stuff all in all and keep it coming.

Terry

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Originally posted by DJ_Knotty hey mate nice tune, im gonna pop it on cd and use it in me next set if im able to, it has that static blue icone feel to it, hehehe nice one mate keep up the good work

sound as mate, let me know how it goes down

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Originally posted by B_man Dude... this bassy euphoric trance tune rocks. I like the feel of the mix even though elements of it feel rather minimalistic from the get go and buildup. Does the phatter lead during the breakdown have a few squares in there? Just curious. It sounds wide, smooth, but a little crispy on the inside. The melody has an interesting drive to it. One problem... Your treble frequencies in the track are either lacking or very weak. I think there is some muddiness somewhere between the bassline and something else... just a tad. Otherwise... it was good.

cheers for the feedback mate, the lead certainly does have some squares in it

i'll look into the muddiness when i got some decent speakers sorted

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Originally posted by Terry Barker listening, like the perc work and kick, are they sampled loops or your own one shots?. nice break, like the bass but the detuned stab does not work for me here, al get back to that. now the plucks are good, and the squares work well! the break up is starting to get a bit repetative, the breaks here and there sound cool though, maybe introduce some pads and more variation here??? breakdown sounds dry, again pad work is probably needed. lead sounds cool, the breakdown is dragging out a tad too. Get some white noise for the kick in too. i like it, dont get wrong, just the few personal tweaks i feel to mention but why lie to producers, blunt critisism is what you need. great stuff all in all and keep it coming. Terry

thanks for that, constructive critisism is the way forward

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thanks

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