Reworked it now, it's longer and much much better IMO. Sounds less cheesy too
Sample is without the bassline

sample

Feedback appreciated

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Last edited by Haak on Apr-08-2002 at 23:52

the 3rd and forth measure sound a little strange.. funny chord

Yeah, there's something about the melody that doesn't seem quite right. But you can work with it, I know you have good taste in trance, just let it show in your work!

you guys are right. I think I'll remake the melody completely. It was just something I layed out in 10 mins

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quote:

Originally posted by trancenation the 3rd and forth measure sound a little strange.. funny chord

Yep. Sounds kinda False if ya ask me. but other then that the first part sounds good!

guys, check out the new sample please

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@ 0:00 - 0:13
Sounds better... but still not awsome.....

@ 0:14

WOW...
That sounds good!
The melody really switched shape there.
The first bars of it sound great, but I don´t like when the melody goes down. I would like it to go up instead...but that´s just a question bout´ taste.

It´s much better!

LAter:Z.....

thanks for your comment robstar. I'm pretty pleased with it now, but I'll experiment some more with it, try if it's better to make it "go up" as you said

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Well, it's an improvement from the first!
Keep working on it!