Hey guys,

Here's a new tune i'm working on, would like to get some feedback on it. You can stream and download it here:

http://beatbiz.net/player.php?tid=1325

Look forward to any comments!

Hey,

listening..
I like the distorted sweeping acid line in the beginning.
Kick works well. the bass is nice and present.
1:10 nice synth stabs.
2:30 things work very well here.
3:10 funny sounds and a funky beat.
5:45 a good fill.
6:30 is kicking with the acidline! Awesome!

This is a pretty well produced, banging full-on track I cant find anything wrong about. This would rock the dancefloors for sure!

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Kick and bass are really well made.

The low sound quality is a real minus, but as long as the percs are quality in normal circumstances.

I've never been a big fan of that cheesy plate reverb that's on the synth at 2:11. Maybe try to turn it down a bit, or change the EQ so that it fits better.

You're getting an ugly dissonant chord in the new bassline half way through when you bend the note. Try changing the synth to mono.

When the melody comes in, it really starts stomping. Good stuff.

The only major problem I had with this was how heavy the plate reverb was. You need to take more time mixing the reverb into the mix so that it acts as a glue, too much reverb can make a mix sound really dissociated.

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link doesnt work...I guess Ill try it later

Thanks for listening!

@ thoughtlessjex

I'll look into the reverb issue you pointed out, thanks for the advice!

Listening

Massive bass drum! Everything sounds great.

1:40 the rhythm is slightly low in the mix, maybe a mastering thing. I think it's the same layer that jex picked out, mainly between 2:00 & 2:50.
This tune so far feels very organic because of the fast frequency of your phaser filtering & the reverb. It's interesing.

There is alot of top end / high frequencies in the mix.

3:30 funky arse

6:00 great layering here!
6:30 & Nice progression...

This is a very fun tune S-tune. Nice work mate, I enjoyed it.

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