Hi. I made this tune using FL studio. Never made a tune before and to be honest i'd like some feedback. Its not great and very computer-like but i'd like a bo bullshit opinion. If you think its total bolocks then thats cool. Just like a few pointers as i've been downloading tunes from this board and want to get to the standard you guys are at. The tune isnt finished and its just a mish mash of ideas but an honest opinion would be awesome. Cheers.

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http://www.sendspace.com/file/h5c3ag

I think the first thing you would need to get at the production level of some of the guys on here is a higher quality os samples and loops etc. The sample that comes in over the kick drum sounds off (out of pitch). Maybe it's just the sample itself though?
Keep at it!