Hey eveyone, Its been awhile since I last posted anything. Any help or feedback would be great. Im glad to be back! Also, I dont have a web space anymore so I uped this to myspace but made it so you can dl it and not have to listen to the crap streamed version.


If anyone knows of a good cheap web host let me know


thanks alot guys

www.myspace.com/astraway

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Last edited by Since Forever on May-09-2007 at 11:28

what the hell, does it suck that bad?

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the track sounded empty, the kick is to weak. and the buildup is just ..

where is the bassline? add some more percussions and pads throughout the tune.

i guess this is your first edm tune?

sorry didnt do it for me,


your other productions however sound decent

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Yeah i agree with Bidor on some of those.

The song doesnt seem to go anywhere, gets pretty boring...fast. You need to introduce a new syth and melody.

I did like the rock beat you put in there at 0:58 and later on, sounded cool.

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thanks for the reply. Ill have to check out the mix levels on my moniters at home and see If I can get them up to speed. As for being thin I have some vocals that I was thinking of adding but thought maybe it was getting to full, hhaha, im just not used to looking at logic and seeing so many tracks running at once.

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