Hey guys, been working on a number of different projects and thought I'd put up a copy of a remix of a classic I've been working on. I am aware that the compression levels are a bit off making it sound like a tyas remix but if you can give me any other pointers, I'd be greatly appreciative

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Jose Amnesia - The Eternal (Starburst 2007 Remix)


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Paul

Nice driving kick, and I really like the feeling in it! I enjoyed good job!


Takere!

Akia

Very high energy. Love the melodies.

I haven't actually heard the original, but this does sound quite good.

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pretty cool, i like!

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Thanks for the comments guys, appreciate the feedback

I'll finish it off and add a few atmostpheric elements to give it more air.

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I'm not a fan of your lead. It's too squeaky and doesn't have enough warmth. It's also a bit too quiet.

I have to say I absolutely HATE that bit at 2:46 where it squeaks. It's absolutely dreadful, sorry mate

Later when you increase the unison on it (or whatever you did to fatten it up) the sound is still bad. Needs alot of work.

I mean it's got energy in it and there's definitely potential for a good remix but I just can't get past the lead. Truly bad.

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Thanks for the feedback Fledz, appreciate it whether it good or bad.
Yeah, the lead was something I'm still trying to sort, I'd spend a day shifting through sample after sample trying to find the right sound and haven't really found it yet.

I was trying to go for a melodic trance and to be honest it sounds more like a hard trancer, which wasn't really my aim and the lead kinda contributes to that genre.

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Paul

Yea it all depends on personal preference. As you can see other people liked it so you can't please everyone

I would seriously work on that drawn out bit at 2:46 though. I hurts my ears lol

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Yeah, i made that bit specially for you Fledz

Yeah, I'd heard something in a tune before and thought I'd try to incorporate that into the tune. Oh yeah, I'd also discovered pitch bend that day as well

It's not the pitch bend that's the problem though, just the synth used.

Cheers for the feedback

Paul

lol how kind of you

The best thing to do when trying to get the right sound is take a few days off. You get sick of trying to get something you like and then everything sounds bad.

Take a break from this for a couple of days and then jump back in. It will be a much easier and less stressful process

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So true, I've just came from home this weekend and everything is sounding a bit sweeter again.

Cheers for the advice

definatly tons of energy

the bass is awesome man

1:30 I like this a lot

1:55, im pretty satisfied, but that chord progression needs another chord to it, it just feels unsetteling. I think i know what you where trying to do, but i think if you tried messing around with an added chord there, you might find something very fulfilling.

2:48, yeah dont like the squeek there

3:00, that sounds great

3:27, yeah that unison or freqencey change is not good

3:50: frowning

4:10 i like the base line, and the build here, but the synth yeah... where did it go?

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