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Last edited by Uber Hypnotiq on May-29-2007 at 02:26

I like the melody and the atmosphere. Nice driving pulse, not so hard maybe, but really nice! I enjoyed, good job!


Takere!

Akia

Listening as I write.

The snare's bottom end eats into the kick frequencies and the kick looses it's presence a little.

The bassline is basic for my tastes, and could probably be beefed up to add drive. It's very one on one off at the moment.

It's an interesting composition.

Your melody, does something that doesn't sound to good at around 5:33, you start hitting a note that doesn't work with the sounds around it and actually sounds out of key (in a bad way).

Overall percussion could be a lot more intense to give it a bit more drive.

I would definately not classify this as hard dance though.
Is this your first or one of your first dance tracks?

There is definately musical ability so I would keep working and I think you will produce some really cool stuff.

Cheers
Nem

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I had a really good time listening to it. Kind of like a blast from the past on the writing style. I agree with Nem about detailing the perc track would really fill out the song as would. One thing that I disliked about this song was how the main melody would transpose at a certain point but not adapt to the new key it was in. Like the otehrs said, I'm guessing this is one of you early productions (in the dance scene) so overall I think you did a pretty good job. That said, I gotta go to work!

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yeah, it's probably my second one i've done in this genre (or not) i've got other hardstyle and hardhouse tracks that progress alot more but i didn't feel it proper to post on here, i noticed the errors ya'll said, went back and it was just misplaced pieces, ima put a couple more weeks to it, cheers ;D

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Originally posted by Uber Hypnotiq yeah, it's probably my second one i've done in this genre (or not) i've got other hardstyle and hardhouse tracks that progress alot more but i didn't feel it proper to post on here, i noticed the errors ya'll said, went back and it was just misplaced pieces, ima put a couple more weeks to it, cheers ;D

Sweet! Keep us in the loop.

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