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Commenting as I listen.
Percussion is nice in the intro.
When the bassline pops into the track, it sounds a little on the thin side, and I'm still undecided whether or not the pitchbend works on it.
Ooooh, there comes a cool sound, ok that's working better now but it's been a long time for not much to happen.
I would say that perhaps a bit more needs to happen prior to the breakdown to keep the attention of the listener.
The overall mix sounds very dry, almost as if you are stuck in a padded room. The overall mix is in some dire need of being spread out a little perhaps try some stereo imaging.
I like the track but would perhaps try and do some more with it as it's still a little on the empty side.
Good job though.
Cheers
Nem
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