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Interesting, sounds like a stadium monster of a track. I don't really like the bass's bottom end that much, you did something with a boobass like thingie that sounds a tad ackward FM-ish. It's more apparent at the beginning of the track. The piano sounds like a dark piano in FL, perhaps overused. Otherwise, I like what's building up here. THe piano seems to fit when the other elements and chording structure is on display.
I really like the flow of the track now... you've got a kicking groove and a lovely elevation to the mood. However, the piano is very simplistic and that makes it just a tad cheesy, but I can't think offhand of a way to strengthen the piano line without making the track melt into cheesy brats.
Um... please change that mini-saw lead that you've got going on there. It's sounds to C-64ish for the rest of the track. You ruined the mood, in my honest opinion.
You've got some very promising material here. You've got the idea here, and the synth and texturing you use is ace. Just change the track from the last breakdown before the cooldown and you will really keep most people here happy. Oh yeah, don't forget to modify your bassline a tad.
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