My second attempt at vocals on a track...this has very moody elements with an organic twist

Title of song is "BecomeMine" it is the first tune on player:

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Not really savvy on vocal trance but... w/e... sounds very minimal at the beginning. The square bass I think needs a hair of pitch modulation.

It does end up groovin a bit. the only thing is, the bass (sounding really neat now) is in the same key as my air conditioner :P . there are some really techno-y grooves which make this totally awesome.
buildup around 6:20 ish is really cool

overall i would call it... ehm... vocal techno
good stuff .

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air conditioner awww I love it ...
thanks for your words

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You really have catched an interesting atmosphere, like the melody! But I think I would prefer it with less vocal. As candian didjer said, this is techy. Maybe minimal techno...


Takere!

Akia

less vocal I can see that let the track breathe a lil ?

good point

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Not even close to melodic trance.

If you weren't replying to the threads I would even consider that you were just doing this to get hits on myspace.

As it stands however I think you have quite a cool track. Not sure if the vocal freaks me out or is just too loud .

The over all track is way too minimal for my tastes but is pretty well put together.
I'm all for different styles here anyway, it's always healthy to get new influence.

Cheers
Nem

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I am on here for those same reasons soemthing new something different . . .

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