Hello. This is energy 4 song i have been working on for a couple of days now. any comments are welcome. Im gonna try to master it a bit more and maye shorten it. But the basic melody and the song structure is there. Im also gonna look for a better title...(title is just based on personal techniques used)

Thnx and ENJoy!

http://download.yousendit.com/4E959D966CCDF589

its 11.3mb

192kb
8min17sec

Nice twangy synth at the start. Reminds me of the sound HV power lines make sporadically.

0:54, I like the way you bring in the bass, and good sound too. Perhaps a bit more complex percussion as well, to give it some more energy.

1:50, Synth sounds a bit like a steel drum. Are the highs filtered out? I'd like to hear this more up-front, like you have it at 2:45.

2:45, Nice stuff happening here. Monotone synth could stand to change notes, perhaps in time with the bass? Even if it climbs with the buildup, could be cool.

4:48, Damn, rumbustious BASS! Nice filter lift, good build.

5:42, I think if you get that kick a bit punchier, then the energy here would fantastic. The buildup to it is great, but the overall sound was a bit quiet after.

Kick COULD be a bit punchier. The sounds are great. Composition is great.

Get this one dialed in and I'll dance to it, promise.

well. thats what i did. i climbed one of those high voltage polls and started recording me plucking those heavy wires like an arp. I guess could have been placed into percussion variation in the beg.

great idea on that monotone bass.. ill make it climb in pitch along with the filtering of the other synths. ill work on that kick too.

what do you mean by dialed in?

now im gonna try to get you commenting on every track i do. great detail.

dialed in... fine tuning... minor final adjustments to get everything working together well and efficiently.

Hey! Great to see you here again!

This song has a good drive! But as 3F05Q said I think the kick could be even more punchier. I like the melody and that distort synth! Well done so far, keep it up!

I will think about suitable titels, catch you on msg with suggestions .


Takere!

Akia

yo mate, thx for listenin to my track...but anyway! that's not what i'm here for! =)

indeed, like the bass that comes in, but it can have anothr bass under that... really like the dynamic/movement in your track... almost psyish.. i think a solid lead that screams and is as sharp as a razor would fit perfectly in here =) i think you need a bigger kick, but thats almost 9 out of 10 times.... and the high notes can be louder, great effect!


nice and organic imo! try taking out more elements and adding those later, for an element of suprise..

breakdown nice, i want more BAZZZZ!



keeep on pushin your sound and you will definitely get somewhere!

so, to make it rock solid, add that extra bass... =) again... bass is the key..low end, pure sounds!

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Sounds really good love your bass !