Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
[FREE] S.C.U.C.K.O.C.K (Radio Edit)
Now doesn't my topic title suck? OOPS I accidentally gave a hint how the letters should be arranged.
Which letters you ask?
Let's take this as an example, say you have one Twinky, lets say the mass of that Twinky = approx. 70gr.
While E=M.E² and E=P.t
so you would get: M.E²=P.t --> t=(P/(M.E²))
Thus while we insert Twinky; t=(P/(0,07.E²))
We can consider like the idiots we are that the Twinky mass in your mouth has a "higher" timeflow than outside of your mouth!!!!! (WhaOMG I didn't KNOW THAT!!!11``)
Einstein = Batman!!
Anyway..
this was just a stupid half untrue story to get your attention for a crappy track .
A track I can't do anything with anymore, I enjoyed producing it but I haven't got any inspiration for it for months. SO today I simply mixed it together and eq'd a little bit and made a radio edit for listening pleasure.
listening.. cool percussions and bassline.. i like the synths.. very stabby.. reminds me of something.. cool track overall.. a bit short, but that you already know.
Registered: Dec 2006
Location: Red Wing, United States (a deep pit... very deep)
HOLY COWBELLS! This sounds like it could be an epic monster of a track. The break and supersaw stabs are cool, but I think that they could be better. Sounds like you used the Superwave P8 for one of the leads, and then it just got rather repetitive without resolving the initial buildup.
Strong idea, good buildup, but the track was somewhat of a letdown. I started something that felt like it could have been finished.
The intro is excellent. I love the potential of it. The lead pattern at the half way point doesn't do much for me.
The lead @ 1:55 is OK. You got the pattern nearly right.
The lead pattern changes at 2:05. It's slower, not as powerful & gets repetitive... It does work when the beat changes @ 3:02 though.
Id just recommend to rethink the lead pattern between 2:00 & 3:00mins & thats it. All other elements are great. You nearly have a powerful kicker treat here. IMO you should finish this, it's got balls
___________________
Jun-07-2007 09:07
Takkra
Smile if you want it.
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
quote:
Subtle said:You are making very much sense these days..
..after two weeks of making only exams im really f00ked lol
4on4'er Im pleased you like the idea! Maybe I just will restart this thing.
Bidor i'll sent you the project file im sure you can make somethig nice from this!
Xenocreator_PG_ thanks alot, it's nice to hear I finally made an intro with potential . i'm happy you pointed out the "missers" and argumented them (bad english, I know! stfu) you convinced me to finish it god, it'll cost me some beer&sleep
Originally posted by Subtle
You are making very much sense these days..
listening.. cool percussions and bassline.. i like the synths.. very stabby.. reminds me of something.. cool track overall.. a bit short, but that you already know.
1+, going better and better kiddo!
Kopi=o.
___________________
My forum for Down Tempo/Ambient/Chillout Music Producers. www.chilloutworld.com
Where the world spins sligthly slower ...
[FREE] S.C.U.C.K.O.C.K (Radio Edit)
.
My feet love! 
.
