Wow I love the opening. I like the way it kind of swooshes in and out. I'm digging the bass in particular. Nice transitions as it evolves. There's a part after the part without drums in the middle where I felt like the lead-in to the break could have been stronger maybe with a snare roll or something. I don't know. But this is really good. Take a look at mine if you would. Peace, Agent Starchild

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Tracks-in-progress (Please help me make these better):
Eve of the Invasion
The Realm of Possibility

I do not know, probably it was necessary to make drums in the middle though it would be desirable to make the middle of softer in difference from all track. Thanks for comments. Excuse for my English, to have to use sometimes the electronic translator 8)

I think the piano in the beginning is too dry. Sounds a little out of place. The beginning is pretty cool though. I love the bassline. What did you use to make it? The buildup is ok. I like the guitar at the break but it would be nice if it had more reverb. After the lead kicks in, it's pretty nice too.

I would say you've got a pretty good production here. Sounds progressive. My style. Keep up the good work.

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not bad track, its tame and chill with subtleties and nice elements, the kick/snare combo were a bit hard for this kind of track i think but it might not have worked as well with something else...

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Originally posted by azndragon0613 What did you use to make it?

I do not remember as it have made, but I remember that used Image-Line ToxicIII v1.4, idle time in work VST and powerful enough

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