8) hi guys! hows it going with you, heres a track done

[luminary_starfleet] reuploaded
http://www.speedyshare.com/277890495.html

Last edited by [nxx] on Jun-18-2007 at 18:53

You make some beautiful tunes dude

Keep up the good work!

Sounds amazing, you should send it out to labels!


Takere!

Akia

Sounds really nice but...

There is no bottom end in this track. The track is positively swimming in high freqs.

The kick has been rolled off too much. and it's just a little click in the background.

I think the bassline needs more presence and needs to drive this along. I would also consider writing an extra bass line to add some more drive.

Hi-Hats need to come down in the mix. To prominant at the moment in my ears.

I think there is a clap in there somewhere but it's so faint that it may aswell not be there.

There is some pretty decent panning in there with the lead and the lulaby style melody which works nicely.

I think the percussion over all could be reworked to beef this up and give it some energy.

A very nice track in terms of melodic values but too many technical issues to consider having this signed at the moment.

Cheers
Nem

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Hey nxx

I listened Your few tracks and I see that they are
very similar... You always begin from kick and rolling bass
... then You start arp... (sounds not orginal in Your tracks)... and meybe You have a nice melodies (pads etc.)
but ... when I heard next track... sounding nearly to previus.. I'm bored... sorry

Greetz.

Melodies are fantastic and very liquid
I have to agree with the above two posts about the mixing however.
I love the lead melody and bass pattern, albeit a bit generic, and the two have great chemistry together. Get that Bass drum up and high hats down
I what delay did you use for the bulk of this song? It had me melting throughout the entire listen!
Great job! Keep us posted!

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8) hi akia, DJ Patski, Nemesis44, seventyseven, Happy2Listen
thanks for the comments and opinion

Hmm... very interesting drive... You've got to balance your choice of frequencies. Very few people listen to trance tunes because they want to crank the treble cleft...

"Just you wait until I turn up these tweeters!"

No, rather it's the bass that gets the crowd hopping.

I think if you could tip the scales towards the bass more and balance it out this could be a winner in terms of stadium power. This is an epic trancer with blazing synths that take me back ot the late 90s. Now you just gotta engineer it better.

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8) hi B_man! thanks for the comments 8)

Reupload to a new host if you could. Speedy Share is having some problems and they deleted your file. Or just send it to me on msn or aim .

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Originally posted by Lindo Reupload to a new host if you could. Speedy Share is having some problems and they deleted your file. Or just send it to me on msn or aim .

+1

8) hi lindo and kitphillips! hey lindo, its great to hear from you.
sorry for the delay 8) here i have reuploaded the track.

[luminary_starfleet]
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