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I would upload your songs to soundclick.com or a similar site to post on forums like this. Myspace's player is simply too clunky. Good for networking, not so good for sound quality. As for the song, the percussion is cool. The bass line is a little too plain. It sounds very muted like I'm supposed to hear things that I'm not hearing clearly. It might be the myspace player. You may have mixed your drums way higher than the other sounds in your song. There are melodic voices very faintly in the background that should come forward more. Are you planning to evolve this a little more? Try having some parts where the drums drop out or drop down to just the snare and kick or snare, kick, and open hi-hat. Or maybe take the kick out in some places. I would also add a voice that's clearly the lead. Right now you've got several voices but you need a lead. Maybe there's one there and it's all just too muted.
Just wanted to throw some things at you since it helps me a lot whenever people do that to me. I hope it helps.
Peace, Agent Starchild
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Agent Starchild
Durham, NC, USA
Those who share the wealth of their knowledge will end up far wealthier and more loved. Those who use their knowledge as a throne from which to sneer at others will never have a true friend.
Tracks-in-progress (Please help me make these better):
Eve of the Invasion
The Realm of Possibility
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