I don't think the mastering is a problem but I'm far from an expert. It has a good flow to it. I really like all the different evolutions it goes through. I particularly like the interlude with the strings. One of your guitarish voices may be clipping a little bit about 2/3 of the way through the song. You know this would be a really cool song to record with actual physical instruments. I'd like to hear how the "guitar" part would sound on a Gibson Les Paul.

Thanks for sharing. Please give mine a listen too.

Peace, Agent Starchild

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Agent Starchild
Durham, NC, USA

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Tracks-in-progress (Please help me make these better):
Eve of the Invasion
The Realm of Possibility

Thank you AgentStarchild for such interesting reflective critics, i will look into the clipping cases when I have recieved my order for some new pro studio monitors. But with the guitar part, you mean the main lead at the end? I did never consider it to sound like a guitar, but then again my crappy headphones

I should stop by and listen to your material right on.

Cheers
JarlB

Last edited by Lascodi on Jul-09-2007 at 20:09