Kinda mellow track. A bit distorted sound though, especially when the crash cymbal hits (or is it my system). Anyway you have done a good work with hihats/percussions, melodies are average level but okay. One thing I definitely would change is the piano starting about 2.30, it bothers me a bit because melody is occasionally out of tune.
Well there's still some work to do, next time try to focus more on soundquality (mastering) but it's fine if this was your first Reason tune .