Ok heres one ive beeen working on. i dont really know what it is uses a tiny bit of vocals from the sound of disco.

Listen here:
http://www.supload.com/listen?s=S1WDl6d2RWM
All feedback welcome..no suger coating nesessary

cool listening...


good strong kick, bassline is tight and fat. are you modulating the cut off manually or via an lfo? has some rhythm but could use a few more variances. is it sidechained, can't tell.

the whitenoise in the percs ... eh, yes, no, maybe so... either highpass it a bit further and put some kind of saturator/auto filter on it becuase it clashes.

pads/strings - need to go. you need something glitchy in this, something with a short attack/release that guides hte bassline along. my motto... flips, fills, reverses, crashes, etc...

the lead after the pad is cool but you need something that is catchy.

okay whitenoise in the percs works now, maybe when you introduce hte bassline, tone it down there


not bad kid_presentable, needs some work but the production is almost there.

Anthony

Thanks for the review and the tips mate, ill take them with me thru to my next track.

Yes the bass is side chained mildly.