its kool man but needs some work but could be a nice tune
what do you use for production

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Life is to short to listen to something else than Trance

Thanks, I'm actually taking a short break from working on it right now. I use Reason 3 exclusively with Vengeance Essential Clubsounds and Nord Lead 3 samples from www.am-sounds.com =]] No VST whatsoever. I'll let you know when I finish it so stay posted OK?

Not bad at all imo

If I can offer advice

Main thing to do is cut it up a bit, good melody progressions but make them a bit more distinct and clear. Maybe by cutting out the bass/percussion/lead at a few points separately or entirely. Eg the bass is 'on' nearly the whole time, maybe fade it out in the middle and have a breakitdown, or just jump the bass back to that electro/treble/distort riff thing you begin with, and then build or kick straight back into the melody. Doing something like this or something similar would make it sound less like a lot of pretty noise and more like a coherent song that sticks in your head after you've listened to it only once

Yeah, I'm getting some hash tonight and I really want to finish this song. It should be cool to get pretty stoned and re-arrange the "song". And you're right, I believe the melody could be more concisely arranged to produce a better effect on the listener. Thanks for the feedback.

lol @ hash

Worked out pretty well, I have added an introduction and tried to create a more balanced song structure. There is an updated link on there so you can hear the work I've done. In terms of production this is the furthest I have ever come in my opinion.

Last edited by Evolve140 on Jul-31-2007 at 04:39

always best to work under the influence =)

love it so far

Yeah I don't work without cannabis. And thanks GeminiZ, I'm still working on this one so stay tuned!

This tune is very close to finished, it just need to be tidyed up a little.

http://lego.zianet.com/tilda140/lightverse.mp3

Last edited by Evolve140 on Aug-01-2007 at 10:35