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First off, don't "bump"...
then...the track is quite good, but the kick is too boomy...it resides in the low end and doesn't have the thump...try some compression or EQ at about 400 hz to get the thump working...the kick will start cutting through the mix a lot better.
Then...you might be needing some more variation to the bassline and/or percussion...look how tracks in similar style are working with the bassline (melodically I mean) you seem to have a good sense for rythm already.
More variation is definitely needed...also the production could be a tiny bit better...all in all good job, keep em comming 
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