Hi all.

Have been reading these forums for quite a while, but havent posted much, let alone uploaded work that I have done, so here is the first tune that I have done.

It is totally unmastered and havent done any EQing as im a bit unsure of what to do, so please dont hesitate to advise me of what might make the sound better.

Would love to hear some feedback...

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Thanks in advance,

Phantom

I haven't heard the original version of this track but I thought I'd give it a listen anyways.

I like those eighth chords and your bassline/bass instrument

What are you using to sequence?

Maybe try panning delays once they have been triggered for more width?

Not a great deal of EQ necessary really, everything seems to fit with everything else fairly well. Not too sure about the bottom end though.

Like a couple of your synths.

I was dying to hear some in your face, blaring, open hats to move the percs on but it just didnt happen (< preference)

I like the tune however I feel it lacks a little variation.

Nice work

Mr K

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little repetative..but nice vibe.
i think the track could due with a less aggressive/punchy kick, a more deep subtle kick would sound better, and maybe slow the bpm down a tad.
nice attempt

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Thanks for the feedback guys.

Mr Kre8, I am using Live 6 to sequence with Reason Rewired into it, plus a couple of VST plugins (Vangaurd and Synth 1).

I toyed with the idea of a ride coming in and out at times, and might go back and add it in.


Mr Rogers, my passion is tech trance, and this due to the remix parts turned out a little proggy, so it was my intention to toughen it a little. Will add that ride cymbal and see what its like, and then onto the next project i reckon.

Any other feedback will be greatly appreciated. I will upload the udated track with ride cymbal when I have it done.

Phantom