This is quite possibly the best track I've made so far in my entire time of producing. I am very proud of it, and I am now asking you all to tear it apart.
Anything you feel I should know or that I could have done better, please don't hesitate to tell me. It's my goal to improve, and if I don't know what to improve upon....well....there wont be any improvement :P.
This is the full version, I made the kick bigger. Please feel free to leave comments/suggestion/critique if you haven't already. Or if something else has come to your attention. Thanks
Life is to short to listen to something else than Trance
Oct-15-2007 21:48
richg101
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Registered: Apr 2005
Location: a universal nation
listening:
very clear from the start. the kick lacks warmth id hope for and gives the impression a deep bass will accompany it soon...
ah yes here it is. bass and kick work well but bass synth needs something more. or at least bring something else into the mix. or turn up your atmospheric synths and efx up in the mix. it will give the mix more potency.
overall the track is good. it lacks a wow point to it. its like a warm up /filler tune. this is a good thing. the last section is much better cos of the increaced groove created by the pulsing percussive synth pattern.
the key for this track will be arrangement so base the structure around a proven warm up track.
nice job man
rich
Oct-15-2007 22:05
Fait
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2006
Location: The ghetto :(
Thanks everyone for your comments
I'll work on it tomorrow (I'll have a lot of extra time) and do some more mixing and re-work the arrangement a bit.
Registered: Mar 2006
Location: Guatemala, Guatemala
not a very big fan of your melodys.....
but that percs ...... huge!
i only think that the kick needs some work, and a nice bassline will make a big diference, like your style men
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Oldenzaal, Netherlands
I have to agree with the others... the track lacks that 'wow-factor'.
The kick definately needs a bit more warmth, and overal I think the entire track could use a bit more 'oomph'. Just sounds a bit too dull to me... Some reverbs could solve a lot, like richg101 mentioned...
Oct-16-2007 14:16
B_man
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Registered: Dec 2006
Location: Red Wing, United States (a deep pit... very deep)
Good ominous intro for a start. The kick has the right idea, but unless it's upgraded from it's initial position, then the big boomy house kick is nowhere to be found. HOwever, it interacts well with this deep bass. It's sine-wave heaven here.
I gave this a listen a week or so ago and loved it. Very well produced, the synths and overall atmosphere if outstanding. Really looking forward to hearing more from you.
Oct-22-2007 02:34
Fait
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2006
Location: The ghetto :(
Thanks everyone
I changed the kick a bit and did some more mixing. I'll up the full 320kbps for you all in a bit.
