title: Overdose
artist: Firework
quality: 320 kbit/s
year: 2007
genre: Tech-Trance

new track for all tech-trance fans. hope u like it. some feedback will be appreciated...
regards,
firework
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The percussion seems perhaps a little disjointed at the start. You have some nice ideas but they dont seem to link together. Loving that harsh piano stab thing. Very nice. Goes quite well with the bass. Snare roll doesn't do the rest of the tune justice as a transition into the next section and the offbeat snare doesn't fit with this section. Some nice synths especially the gated one and a pretty cool bassline. When the stab comes back it just doesn't work at all, it's the wrong pitch.

Pretty good tune, some minor adjustments needed imo.

K

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Originally posted by Stereoid thanks for feedback. still learnin

hey friend, thanks for feedbackin my track. heres mine


many ideas going on in your track. maybe a bit too much.
i dont see any clear buildup (something that builds tension) if you know what i mean.

bassdrum and perc is cool. i like it when the heavy kick bounces in.
clap is way to muddy to my taste. would like to hear something with more smack there.
the stack sound you introduce at 0.40 is very good, together with the bassline it sounds übercool.
1.40 get rid of that sound. doesnt fit imo.
the sound that comes in abit later around 2.40 is way better. very dark and gritty. i would build on that sound and dedicate it a long breakdown with rising and falling reverb decay and stuff like that.

your mixing/sounds is decent. you just need more work on the arrangement.

Agree with both comments above...IMHO maybe to many elements here. Try to use less elements and have them the build on each other. This will help with arrangement

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cool shii'had, i'd definitely download and listen to this... I guess just clean it up a tad, and shoot it out to labels

Just play around with the EQ on the bass and maybe widen the highs on it bit

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