8) hi guys! hows it going, heres a track done. link is below

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I enjoy the build-up at the start, especially when the melody starts to come through, although it gets a bit messy at around 1:30. It seems to me like there's a bit too much going on at that point. Also, that air pressure sound during the break throws me off a bit, not sure if you know what I mean.

The track has tons of potential I just think you could play with it a bit more. I get the feeling there are too many layers clouding the overall melody and feel. It's like a big tease since the tune I'm picking up underneath it all sounds so good!

Equos

Last edited by Equos on Oct-04-2007 at 01:10

This track is huge. I mean huge in my headphones. Holy crap. Rad.

Honestly though... I agree with Equos on all accounts.

Also, The kick needs to come out more.

I think the high end needs to be cut here and there on some instruments, it seems.

Percussion is tight and fitting.

The overall feel is effective though, big ups for that!

uplifting kinda epic trance right?
use a compressor for that kick, and it will make a nice diference
and this is just my opinion but, you should not start and finish your tracks with the bass... but just my personal opinion.

you should work more on it.

hope you can show it to all of us later

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your tracks have that "Sensation" feel to them.. pretty awesome! really cool breakdown.. but the Qlimax is missing something.. not sure... maybe try to give it a different bassline or synth... i think the main lead might be overpowering the rest a bit. otherwise is a pretty cool tune man, keep it up! and hopefully it will get played in "Sensation" sometime

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