Hi all!

It has been a while! I moved, got a new system, and am finally finding enough free time to get back to the music. "Do It" is my latest track...hope you like it!

You can also listen to it and my other tracks on myspace. This one runs a little long, so I may edit it still, but let me know what you think!

Cheers!

http://www.myspace.com/djjackpea

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Last edited by jackpea on Oct-01-2007 at 19:13

Listening.... I like the bass/syths but I thnik they need to be mixed better. THey seem to loud for the mix. Need to turn up the kick so it stands out more. Track seems a little flat. needs some drum variation and more precusion. Syth at 2.10 or so might need to be a different sound. Maybe shorten it a little and have the transitions happen a little sooner. Just my 2 cents but I am pretty new to production so I might be way off base


Best,
Justjabbin

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Thanks for the feedback...I think you were right, the synths were a little overwhelming and drowned out some of the percussion, etc.

I edited a little, changed some levels and cut out the intro...should be better now!

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the bassline needs to be more dynamic, make some changes in it.
the melodys didn´t like it, are to flat, the idea of the track its great! but needs more work....
is this the final version? hope not... you can make it better always

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tee dawt! added ya

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Made a couple of changes...check it out now...Trimmed it down a little, so it should flow better.

Cheers!

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