I have listen to this tune to death, and lost all perspective...

How does it sound to you?

The issues I'm thinking may be there...Maybe the kick is too loud, and it's force the rest of the mix to get quiet in mastering (though if I was any good and multi-band, I'm sure that could be fixed easliy).

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THX

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^ sounds fantastic, really diggin the drive of this. i don't think there are any sound issues with the kick-bass combo. then again i do preffer a powerfull 4/4 kick so it might be a tad big for some.

bonus points for creative ending.

Yeah...Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking about that kick, it may be too loud in the mix, but that loudness gives ita certain BOOM...I think I like it...It may make the rest of the mix quieter, but I think it work, right?

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Dialogue opening... different for me. Personally I would have dispersed the lines throughout the first half of the song and ended each phrase/line with a fat reverb/delay tail. But... again, that's just me!

Clicky panning thing fits nicely.

Another peronal preference: I'd sacrifice some kick bottom end for more bass bottom end... but get more thoughts on that before you change anything.

Ha! Ending is brilliant! I pictured something breaking down and going out of control sweeping left to right. Great job!

Thanks for the feedback...though i got badness. The session for this file got corruped and lost...So I can update it or anything...Al that's left is the idea, so this tune is dead. If you liked it a lot keep this one safe.

So...thats the story.

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Well, I'd give constructive feedback, but it won't be worth much, really. I'll just say that this track didn't really need to have any more done to it anyway. It's fine as it is. Keep ahold of this mp3.

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my friend had a copy of the file...but its an early verison...so this track is getting re-made.

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Originally posted by Frost-RAVEN my friend had a copy of the file...but its an early verison...so this track is getting re-made.

Well, then my only complaint is that the lead could be louder, although the remake may make that complaint obsolete through a change in the track's nature.

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