Just like my remix of Paulson - Not By A Long Shot, this one came about in a matter of hours. I started this from scratch with just the straight a capella uncut at about 12:15 tonight, and hammered this baby out in the last 3 hours. So as usual, I'm wondering if its just me being really tired, or if this is half-decent. Anyways, give a listen and report back.
thanks



edit: final version's up

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Last edited by mezzir on Oct-11-2007 at 15:35

I'll give this a listen and get back to you.

i really have no idea what to say, its just to out of my style.

but lets try
i think you should play more with the vocals, and not use them all the time.
percs are good, bassline to.
i think the track its really great. nothing to complain

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Originally posted by G. Cazali i really have no idea what to say, its just to out of my style. but lets try i think you should play more with the vocals, and not use them all the time. percs are good, bassline to. i think the track its really great. nothing to complain

yeah the vocals were just laid out vanilla and whatnot, i've done a lot of fiddling since
i'll have a new version up later tonight

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bump for final version

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It's cool, conceptually, but the levels are just way too screwy for me and I'm having trouble enjoying it.

Mind you, I'm listening on crap headphones, but...

- lead sounds way too loud
- percs seem too quiet
- kick almost seems non-existant
- some of the initial vocals/fx are too chopped/random... no subtlety.

Now, at 3:07, with the chopped up vocals... I am really enjoying this. =) That's much better, without that enormously loud lead clouding everything up.

I think I would really enjoy this if that lead would just stfu... I think that's my main complaint. Just a little too "in your face". I'm at 5:15 now and I'm really enjoying the layered vocals done in a round-style. Very cool.

My favorite part is the break at 3:07. If there was more of this somewhat minimized sound throughout more of the track, I'd probably play it out in front of a top 40 crowd to keep their attention when I'm playing house.

Sounds good! You just need to work on mixing to bring the percs to a little more prominent level.