http://lego.zianet.com/tilda140/headroom.mp3

Thoughts?

Much love,
Jesse

nice percs
nice melodies

lose the reveerb on the bassline
some eq work needs to be done

it has the potential to be a bom

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liked this track... i'd say reduce the reverb on the bass but maybe not get rid of it altogether, some transitions coudl use a tiny bit of work, but i mean... i'm nitpicking.. it's gonna be a solid track when it's done and mastered. also, perhaps try fading in the high pad that comes in after the first break, perhaps over the break? idk, just a suggestion, it's your track.

but very nice work, the beat has a leon bolier-ness to it... idk why i think of that, lol

Thank you for the feedback, it really is appreciated. Here is an update.

http://lego.zianet.com/tilda140/moremore.mp3

As you can tell, I've gone through the elements and made the transitions a little bit smoother. The transitions aren't my biggest concern at this point, I am working on the arrangment and composition itself. I have a great feeling about this track!

Wow man, i loved the melodys and timbres! Agree with what was said above. Would like to hear the finished track.

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http://lego.zianet.com/tilda140/thesong.mp3
Hopefully this is the last demo before I actually finish it. Thanks guys.

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I really like the melody. Only thing is it seems really air out and not as full. The simple drum beat does it for me, I like that. All I would advise is work on the EQ bit and some "fullness" Keep it up

This track has a lovely vibe to it. Like the pad type synth. Maybe the bass type distorted lead is a bit thin but does have a nice sound to it.

The guitar section came in a bit abrupt for me.

Overall the track lacks a bit of brightness and the arrangement doesn't seem quite right but I can't put my finger on what it is. Just doesn't flow right.

Lot of potential here though so keep at it

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