Wow! Thats some monster bass line you've got there. Reminds me of the old 98-99 bass lines of old trance and thats a good thing.

As the track develops, maybe the bass is too much? Drowning out the other elements a touch though the kick seems to cut through quite well.

The leads are quite good. Maybe they sit in the background a bit too much though and lack some clarity.

Melodies are nice. Breakdown was nice as well but I didn't think the rapid filter movement worked too well before the kick comes back in.

Its a little bit stuck on one level which is something I find I struggle with as well.

Overall quite good 7/10

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Do the mixing again, drop the bass level, it kills the kick and masks almost all of the lower eq spectrum. At some point i could hardly tell what i'm listening to
It needs a lot of eq-ing, it's too messed up atm.

When it's fixed, it'll be a nice track, i like the harmonies in there a lot!

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Everything in this track is a badass idea except for the mixing. Muddiness rules supreme in the lower elements and leaks into the upper elements. THe kick drum is weak, and the bassline has way too much wideness. It is uncontrolled, and needs to be tamed so that the lowest frequencies sit in the center, and the higher ones can be wider if applicable.

Otherwise, this is a very interesting piece. I want to know what you are using to mix... speakers, phones, and monitors and in what atmosphere.

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8) hi Tarpex, G-Con, B_man, hows it going guys, thanks for listening 8)

um after reading, well like G-Con said, the leads is in background, thats probably why, if i put it upfront and make drier, it will be like the other track cosmos synergy one or the last track exospheric ion, in that one the lead was priority. in here maybe got drowned abit by the pad and bass as they are upfront.

tho its been a while since i used some similar fx, u might notice some of these fx from earlier 160bpm tracks, well akia and alot of you guys would know those, was great fun 8)

Last edited by [nxx] on Oct-25-2007 at 05:03

Hello [nxx]!

I think that bass is pretty cool! But as the other said it drowning most of the other elements... I would like to hear more of the main melody, it´s worth to hear!


Takere!

Akia

8) hi akia! hows it going, yes it need some fix,
meanwhile take care

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