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dbl
Whitesun



Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Gothenburg/sweden
Finally a new track up

so.. i finally got the time to finish my track.
i think it's the best track i have made, and i hope you will like it consider that i have only been producing in about ˝year... well well

download here

and tell me what you think of it and give me some tips on how i can improve myself...

EDIT: the name is now "in the darkness" and i have ploaded it again if you want to hear the full version since it seems like it was something wrong with it


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Whitesun



Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Gothenburg/sweden

hmm.. anyone?
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Old Post Apr-30-2002 15:43  Sweden
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Downloading now


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Old Post Apr-30-2002 16:16  United Kingdom
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Listening now..

I like the Kick drum, but the O.jhat and percs sound very cheap (Fruity sounds right...?) and i would suggest not using them

The synth that fades in at about 1 min is quite nice...

The boom are.. i dunno... abit too loud.. theres a bit too much exageration on them...

The b-up before than lo synth comes in is okay....but the low synth its self...is very annoying and doesnt sound that good...

The lead is quite kool (Sim Synth yea..?) melody is quite moody, not particularly catchey or uplifting, but dark and moody...

The sort, broken kick/break beat part is quite nice but again, the cheap percs!!!

When the song gets going its pretty neat... im starting to like the melody more, but the drums ruin it for me...

Ahh, nice plucked sound at around 5mins...and nice synth after that but agian, the drums!

Hmmm... i dunno if my d/l screwed up but the track ending suddenly at around 6:30...

Overrall... i well produced track with some good ideas but needs more work..

6 out of 10

Keep at it

[Dan]


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Old Post Apr-30-2002 16:25  United Kingdom
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Whitesun



Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Gothenburg/sweden

the download is screwed up caus the song is 8:15...

well.. i know the drums are a bit cheap (FL drums) but i will change them as soon as i find some good one's

thank's for the comments


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Icone
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Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Leuven, Belgium
Re: Finally a new track up

Hey dbl

I loved the way the beat drives you through the track, but as Dan stated, the drums are maybe the weakest point of the track... the main melody is moody, and maybe tweaked a little too hard and too loud. Those are the only weak points though, the rest of the track sounds pretty well

i would call it 'dark nights' or something like that since it's dark and brooding atmosphere... maybe a little more work on the tune and it'll be alllllright

take care!
Wim @ LW

PS: i got the same problem as Dan had, I only got 4:51 of the track though, then it suddenly stopped... don't know why


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DJ-Ande
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Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Darlington, England
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dling now..... is it called project 18???????? just wondering cos thats the name it sez wen u go 2 save it 2 disk, i will edit wen i get it

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Whitesun



Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Gothenburg/sweden

it's not the name on it... well, i don't have a name on it yet..
i'm so bad at name's, but if you come up witha good one please tell me


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Whitesun



Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Gothenburg/sweden

thank's for the comments LW... i know of the drums...
looking for some good drums now

anyone know of any good drums out there?


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Old Post Apr-30-2002 23:35  Sweden
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NIGHTERROR
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Rome

Hi m8


well i haven't listened a bass in the track.....work on it too...

For the drum use the drum machines of buzz.....(the emulation of the 909 it's great) and put there a little little bit of effect.....

if you want some machines of buzz hust contact me on icq

see ya ........

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Whitesun



Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Gothenburg/sweden

i will contact you...

you can read at the first post, but i have fixed the song so it should be the full version now


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Old Post May-01-2002 17:24  Sweden
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