The idea behind this is really awesome. Overall I love what you did, though for me I would use a different bass/kick. Overall cool stuff, keep it up!

The start of the track is great, but once the percs and bassline come in it just doesnt seem to come together.

You might consider going a deeper route with the kick and bass, and imo choosing a few better samples for your percussion.

Keep at it

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hey cheers for feedback - anys uggestions on what kinds of bass/kick? I personally really liked them, but seems theyre not liked much..
Ill have a little dabble, see what i can do