Here's my latest track "One Like the Sun". The quote was taken from the scene in Ocean's 13 where Linus is reading the poem/letter from Basher. Still learning and very interested in what advice you all have to offer. I appologize for the quality of the track (96kbps). It is 8 min long and myspace only lets you upload 6Mb.

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Sounds realy friendly and nice
There are some wrong notes in the arrangement though
@ 1;50 you hear it best in the whole song

I like this kind of peacefull dance music
But imo it does need a lil more ballz
The base drum is realy far to mild
I bet it will sound a lot beter if you put a more solid kick in though

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