Maybe funky house? I loved making this, spent at least 15 hours on it all together. I'm quite happy with the results. Let me know what you think!

Length: 5:42
Size: 13MB
Bit Rate: 320kbps


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Chris Crossland - You Remind Me

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Its a solid little house tune. I hope you didn't do that 15 hours straight I would need a pack of redbulls..

My favorite part is the bass line. simple but cool and driving,although I kept waiting for a breakdown where it would go away but it never came.
You have a solid loop but no theme changes. Add some breakdowns kill the kick and bass line two or three minutes in build up then bring it back. Do that a couple times at least.

its a groove though no doubt. I like!!

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Originally posted by samurai 3000 Its a solid little house tune. I hope you didn't do that 15 hours straight I would need a pack of redbulls.. My favorite part is the bass line. simple but cool and driving,although I kept waiting for a breakdown where it would go away but it never came. You have a solid loop but no theme changes. Add some breakdowns kill the kick and bass line two or three minutes in build up then bring it back. Do that a couple times at least. its a groove though no doubt. I like!!

Thanks! I split it up between this week haha it wasnt non stop, my creativity dwindles after a while. Yeah, i noticed that there wernt any breaks admiring the wave. I'll work on it some more.

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At first I'm NOT digging the small room reverb on the kick drum... not neccesarry for a kick IMHO. The syths sound pretty good at first then it starts to sound kind of cheesy. It almost seems like you need to approach the mastering from another angle before this could be listenable. The bassline dominates the track, the piano doesn't have any presense at all. The mix down could potentially sound good because you have orchestrated it well. But the EQ and all of that is not working for me. I wouldn't play this at a party or anything like that.