been workin on a new track which i have not come up with a name for yet. its a bit of trance since i have not made any trance for a few months. im just looking for opinions on the sounds etc before i go and mix it properly. my influence was 'basshunter - now your gone'. originally it was gonna be really pop styled trance but i decided to go a little more underground in the end.

you can hear it here:-

http://www.myspace.com/richardgaleremix

opinions taken on board

rich

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i assume it's the "untitled" one.

i like the lead and bassline. the choir/pads adds up a nice atmosphere.

maybe add some more percussion, can't hear many elements there.

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For what it's worth, it gets my vote.

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maybe add some more percussion, can't hear many elements there.

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Pretty nice mate, although i would want to hear the lead/strings go down one octave or so somtime!

Cheers

Sounds pretty decent so far, I for one love those strings in the background.
The kick seems to be a bit heavy at the moment, though.

Nice work.

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Nice track

love the synth at the start

and the acidy sound going on in the background

i think the track just needs a bit more variety to keep it more interesting throughout

but overall really nice track

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hey rich....

im checking your tune right now, beautiful pads!

im under quite a tad of ethanol influence, both that and the track create a really trancy state.

so good job at that

love it!

crikey mate.

but it's not like a lead I can easily remember.

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hey, rich,

guess it's about the track "untitled"
as mentioned some more percussion would bring some more drive into the whole thing...
everything else sounds good too me...i really love the higher melody later on..synth on this is great, aswell...
also the bass makes a decent impression on me..

keep it up...

an outstanding peace of music. 10/10. love the mastering!

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Hey mate

Sounds pretty good to me - love the main acid sounding lead

Just abit more variety and a few niggly bits and your on to a pretty sick tune

Nice 1

reDifine

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lol - i didnt think it sounded too clean to me. it hasnt been mastered yet.

thanks for all the replies guys. more percs, or at least, more variation is the order of the day im understnding. cheers

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